Quick Japanese sentence help . . .?

Just need help with this sentence. In school we call it '...shi,.....shi' sentences, but I don't know if that's what it's actually called.





Furansu wa ryouri ga totemo oishihattashi, omoshirokattakute kireina tokoro dashi, yokatta tenki desu.


I'm trying to say: In france, the food was very delicious, it was an interesting and beautiful place, and what's more, the temperature was good.





Help me out?|||し (shi) is a conjunctive particle. It is mainly used in conversation. It's regarded a little casual to use in written language.



It mostly means "and".

You should avoid the excessively frequent use of "shi" . But younger people (ex. high school students) tend to overuse it.



Your sentence is quite correct, but it has some unatural expression.

It should go like this:

Furansu wa ryouri ga totemo oishiKATTAshi, omoshiroKUTE kirei na tokoro dashi, tenki WA YOKATTA desu.